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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Verb tenses were making this a hard read. Could be a good read but you need to clean up the verbs.

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I have always enjoyed writing, but never published. I like to write about all subjects and situations. Writing has always been a way to fulfill my fantasies