All Comments on 'Halloween Surprise'

Kissing feet. Then eating pussy? No intermediate steps? Why not. Why no baring of her tits? Teasing him with her tits? Touching his cock? Handjob -- but not to completion? etc?

I like seeing it go straight to sex for a change. Why does every story need to go through the same sequence of she-eats-him, then he-eats-her, etc etc etc

Besides, that's part of the surprise, no?

Liked the style-story held together.

I am not a big fan of BDSM but,the story was nice. There was just one problem that it wrapped up way too quickly. Even though the story was more than one page, but it went so fast that it came to an abrupt end.

She tries to hit him with the riding crop and he either grabs the crop or her. Either way he's in complete control. You think if he lowers his shoulder and runs at her she won't get crushed? This was just stupid.