All Comments on 'Halloween Surprise...'

This story has great potential but stops just as things are getting interesting. A good first story though so please, continue...

Personal preference for avoidance of the word 'todger' but this did not really spoil it too much.

She went first to the Police. Then to an attorney. She divorced him for cause and guilt by association. She sued Danny for assault and battery. Winning 80% of the marital assets and a high 6 figure sum from Danny made moving and starting over not a problem. What an idiotic story.

Interesting, but odd choice of words. It's obvious what "todger" means, but I wonder if anyone really ever uses it. Also "rotter" is well known, it also is just not a word used by anyone any more.

Also seems a bit odd that the wife seems to be enjoying the experience, but the husbands seem to only be concerned with there own pissing match.

Good start but keep working on it.