All Comments on 'Halloween with Mom Pt. 02'

Thank you all for reading my work. Let me know how you felt. I hope to continue the series even further. I don't have a set plot, so let me know if you have any suggestions.

Thank You for sharing her naughty self-talk!

hope there it a part 3

Part 3, please, when they get home and he confesses to her that he knows it was her in the Catwoman costume, they realize that they have fallen in love with one another, and she never take the morning after pill.

More please!

really not too bad considering you're so new to writing. main thing is to proof-read or get an editor to clen up some of your mistakes like "As his hand started pumping his couch". also learn how to flesd out your characters more, giving a bit more background into each of their personal lifes if you're looking to make this more than a quick jerk story and want to make it into more chapters.

Fuck, that was hot! More, please!

Agree with this comment 100%.... "Part 3, please, when they get home and he confesses to her that he knows it was her in the Catwoman costume, they realize that they have fallen in love with one another, and she never take the morning after pill."

Looking forward to more.

Love it! More please.

Fab! Make mom pregnant next, so he can suckle her milk

Excellent setup and followup. Well designed story. I vthink ch 3 she forgets the pill, gets pregnant and that requires the confirmation of the son's suspicions. Very good story line and followvthru but needs ch 3 and maybe more.

maxillodragon,

You're 2 for 2 here.

Love the tease, "Cum inside Mommy." Chef's Kiss. lol!

Next stop Chapter 3.

Great ride so far,

WB

Sorry...3/5...too many distracting errors...your back acknowledgement of your weaknesses as a writer STILL do not excuse writing like this!

Like the story. I wish the son was a little more observant and mentally acute. Likewise, I wish the mother was more self-secure with her son. Over the years they have discovered each other's likes, dislikes, favorite activities. etc. At this point in time, I would hope they could explore/discuss their sexual side. They are matuure adults.

You really should try to keep up with what you’ve already written. Mom changed costumes after their first fuck, then somehow was back to catwoman for the second. Continuity counts. Otherwise, a good tale. DMW

Thank you

5/5

Nato_

Love thrm cause they thee short n sweet.