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Click hereThe second she was outside, she saw her son reaching the top of the staircase. His eyes met hers and she could see the hint of a faint smile forming on his lovely face.
"What would you like to do next?" he asked as he came to her.
"I think I'm done for the night. Take me home?" she said turning towards the door and placing her arm around him while leaning her head on his shoulder.
"Yes, I would like to go home too" he said mimicking her hand placement.
You really should try to keep up with what you’ve already written. Mom changed costumes after their first fuck, then somehow was back to catwoman for the second. Continuity counts. Otherwise, a good tale. DMW
Like the story. I wish the son was a little more observant and mentally acute. Likewise, I wish the mother was more self-secure with her son. Over the years they have discovered each other's likes, dislikes, favorite activities. etc. At this point in time, I would hope they could explore/discuss their sexual side. They are matuure adults.
Sorry...3/5...too many distracting errors...your back acknowledgement of your weaknesses as a writer STILL do not excuse writing like this!