All Comments on 'Handcuffed and Helpless...'

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Paul_writesPaul_writesabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for popping in and reading this short tale. Please offer any comments on your mind. 👍

Paul_writesPaul_writesabout 1 year agoAuthor

Perhaps I should have listed this tale under "Humor" rather than BDSM?

It's a very mild case of BDSM... at best. Lol... 😂

Thoughts?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Don't quit your day job.

TatankaBillTatankaBillabout 1 year ago

The Iceman Cometh. Cool short story!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Anonymous really needs to learn constructive criticism. This was a good start and could have been made longer. Don't give up writing the story has promise, and so does your writing.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Very nice story in and of itself. I'd like to see the plot develop further; perhaps Paul is convinced to do this again under different circumstances...?

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Loved it just as it is.

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These tales are written while I sit on a chair. I have a short attention span, so flash fiction is my preference. Music, new recipes and outdoor activities are some of my interests. When I found the word insouciant, I was pleased with how perfectly it describes my attitude. ...