by Paul_writes
Thanks for popping in and reading this short tale. Please offer any comments on your mind. 👍
Perhaps I should have listed this tale under "Humor" rather than BDSM?
It's a very mild case of BDSM... at best. Lol... 😂
Thoughts?
Anonymous really needs to learn constructive criticism. This was a good start and could have been made longer. Don't give up writing the story has promise, and so does your writing.
Very nice story in and of itself. I'd like to see the plot develop further; perhaps Paul is convinced to do this again under different circumstances...?