All Comments on 'Handsy Jack Ch. 02'

I liked it. you created a character with a voice.

Your story was just too hard to read. You would benefit from having someone else proof your story. There are so many misspellings, incorrect capitalizations, improper punctuation usues and oddly constructed sentences that it made your story not very exciting to read. Hey, we all make mistakes but it should not be published till it is checked and re-checked.

I've been fucking my mom for several weeks since we are alone together all the time. It doesn't help that my mom has a great body.

hope you continue the story