by ChloeTzang
Always a pleasure to read your stories, even if they are FAR out there. Imagining a foursome or a fivesome or … hell, whatever many “some” pleasuring a woman in every way- but it’s only one… well, I was going to say “human” but that doesn’t quite fit, does it? I wasn’t quite sure whether to laugh or just be amazed at how you so intricately intermixed reality with fantasy. Well done once again.
That was fun! Great work Chloe. Only seven more tentacles to go before you’re fully sated!
America wants more Jeong Park! You created something genuinely beautiful and moving, and we need more. This was good, but more Jeong please.
Ms Tzang
5* X 2 at least. Another in your great list of stories.
All I can say is keep on keeping on.
Cheers, Terry
"The author asserts a moral right to be identified as the author of this story, although she's really not sure she wants to admit to that."
The wickedly creative meets the hilarious, right at the beginning. Is this a bit of an odd couple? A mixed marriage? Are heptapods prone to yellow fever?
You crack me up with the aussie references.... "Neighbours" is making a comeback too.
Not just America, many of us in other countries want more Jeong Park and we were supposed to be getting another chapter before anything else got written, but then Chole decided to write this instead... it was okay but kind of boring.
Hope you all enjoyed the little asides, like Skippy the Bù Shí Dài Shǔ, and Ky-Lee Ming-Oh. LOL. I couldn't help myself. I HAD to do that. And bogans. I had to work some bogans in.
As for the next chapter of Jeong - one more story that I'm finishing and submitting tonight for the April Fools thing (tonight midnight is the cutoff) and then I'll finish Jeong 11 this weekend and get it submitted, and then you can all start giving me a hard time about when Jeong 12 will be done. LOL.
Every bit as enjoyable as the earlier Heptapod story Chloe and, yes, I did get all the Aussie references which made me smile. Ziggy and the great white made me think of the creature features from the 1950s. More soon (or if not soon, one day)?
Wow! A Space Opera that reminds me of the works of Cordwainer Smith and E. E. "Doc" Smith. A stunning 5* read.
You need to start a serie with Ziggy and Stardust. I love these stories and you've already got a head start with these two.
“without even a hint of that horrible sun-tanned brown that would make me look like a peasant from the rice paddies.“
Thank you Chloe. Loved the comment. I tease my wife every once in a while when she has been out in the sun.
Both stories were very enjoyable. Hope to read about Ziggy and his daughter in the near future.