All Comments on 'Hannah Loved Erotica'

Nice story about sex at a young age

I guess I have to believe the first part of the story when you said that you were a terrible proofreader because in the same paragraph you "filed a niche that wasn't common". I kind of wanted to give you the benefit of the doubt but the little errors just kept happening. I had to laugh when we found out Hannah was "no longer a version".

You do have a good imagination but unlike fine wine, your writing doesn't get better with age, you're still making the same errors as in the first of your stories I've read. Again, get a good editor and your ratings will probably see an improvement. Hopefully this will be taken as constructive criticism as that's what it is intended to be. At least you have written and posted stories, more than some of us will ever do. Thanks

It is good to see this author writing again. While in this story there could be some improvements in the grammar, it has a good introduction, interesting characters, and a good plot. The love scenes, however, are much too short and certainly could be enhanced.