by johnrocker_lit
Latest chapter of SNF is still in the works, I’ve been quite busy with work lately.
This is a story I had previously written but never published, hope you all enjoy
The story over all was good, all the scenes were good but it all could have been done page 4. it seem to drag on in some place and went to fast in others. I will read another chapter if you write one just hope you keep it interesting from start to finish.
So I love this theme.
There is the famous story of the Sis in law and the back seat.
The recent series with Brooke.
And now your addition to the genre here on Literotica.
This is quite possibly the best.
Just DON'T RUSH IT!
Make sure to add tons of psychological shit.
Tons of fucked up worry and adrenaline scenarios.
This is gonna be one of the great series on the site if you don't rush.
To any other authors reading start doing more in this genre. We all fucking love it!
Incredibly done. You’re a first class writer at writing these young females.