All Comments on 'Hannah's Revenge Ch. 05'

Glad that you are back! I am pretty excited about the nasty stuff Hannah is going to do...this chapter is a little tame but after all the previous filth that is totally fine. I hope that Victoria will be shared again with the dyke teacher and maybe she will enjoy a few things in the future...who knows?

I’d like to announce after several years of hiatus that I’m proudly returning to the world of erotica and continue fan favourite story: Hannah’s Revenge.

While all new chapters of Hannah’s Revenge will be posted on Literotica, and always free of charge; for early access to new chapters of Hannah’s Revenge, along with access to Patreon exclusive new stories and commissioned artworks, consider subscribing to my Patreon.

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Chapter 6 of Hannah’s Revenge is already available there for Patrons to view.

But overall, I just wanted to say how much I’ve appreciated your continued support, even during my absence, and hope to pay you all back with some quality erotica now that I’m back.

Thanks for your support, I’m glad to be back too.

I know this chapter wasn’t quite as full on as the other ones, but it was supposed to serve as a character introduction for Victoria’s friends. And not to venture into spoiler territory, but you can trust that things will be getting very filthy with them soon enough

Victoria will come home to open the door and find her naked voluptuously shaped Mom is being pulled by a leash affixed tso her neck by Mistress McLaughlin. Mistress Hannah is there to explain why her Mom is being disciplined for her imprentious behavior displayed towards others which affecondcted Victoria and her behavior be towards others. Victoria smiles and gives Mistress Hannah a heartfelt hug before walking over to her ashamed naked Mom to add two more hard swats to her reddening ass. She then quickly strips naked to show her shocked Mom no bra and panties before taking Mom on multiple crawls inside the house while berating her for such insolence shown others before taking her to Mistress McLaughlin who spreads open her naked pussy for Mom to start servicing with a very willing tongue as s holeshe hates sating Hannah's fetid pussy. After being briefed on Mom's racist behavior towards lesbians especially Hanannah, Victoria becomes becomes a Mom's Mistress and takes care of applying discipline on Mom until she is reduced to submissively lasciviously pleasing both Hannah's fetid pussy and asshole. Hannah invites over a black lesbian to explore and expand Mom's very narrow horizons to unconditional servicing all her holes on a moment's notice without hesitation. Mom becomes a very busy submissive woman, eager to please others at the drop of a hat

In attempt to alter the pricing structure to make my Patreon more accessible to fans who wanted to enjoy exclusive early-access to new chapters of my works before anywhere else, alongside Patreon exclusive stories and artworks, I was forced to delete the account and make a new one. Unfortunately, that means the link to follow the old one no longer works and the new one the gave me is slightly less catchy.

Sorry for any inconvenience, but I wanted to alter the pricing structure to allow more people easier access to my work, which Patreon didn’t want me doing.

I’m having to make a new comment because Literotica doesn’t let you edit them, but if you check my bio you’ll see that this new link is for my official Patreon and is the best place to go for exclusive stories and artworks, to say nothing of the early releases, like chapter 6 of Hannah’s Revenge which is already there.

https://www.patreon.com/user?u=34967467

The title should be self explanatory, as to the disorienting and distracting and incoherent fad in some Domination stories or BDSM or whatever for the "fearsome" mistress to be request to be called "Goddess". A slave has a mistress , not a goddess. Body worship is not deity worship (after all it is a figure of speech). A slave is owned and controlled by a mistress. The illogical and dissonant use of the goddess term actually detracts from taking seriously the relationship that is the premise of the story.

Another problem is the easy way in which this relationship was established. It seems the "heroine" would have made an attempt to get out of this non-sense. Keep writing. Just take your material more seriously. Thanks.

Regarding the comment below: Yeah, its obviously carved in stone that a slave never has a goddess only a mistress....Seriously I am always amazed of how ridiculously stupid some comments are. I mean, if you dont like the story for its content its fine but that one thing is just pretentious.

Interesting And Disturbing,,,Yes!

Hallo T.B.M!

Well there's nothing wrong with your story telling.......If this is strictly speaking, just a story?!

Gay Kat!