All Comments on 'Hannah's Revenge'

sad

what a sad and disgusting piece of trash you are

troubling story. Only a deeply disturbed person would write a story such as yours.

That is just nasty. I don't know what happened to you but I hope you heal.

Sad, but quite hot and well written. Dont bother about the negative comments. People are different. Keep on your good work!

They should both be covered in shit and then eat shit oatmeal and shit ice cream and shit covered fried chicken and shit milkshakes. Yyyuuuummmmmmoooooooo!

:)

How could Hannah not make her lick her armpits too? That was what I was waiting for.

You really have to make another one. Maybe her waking up in Hannah's room doing some nasty shit?

I think you can do way more. And have all of Hannah's friends be involved. Each one more filthier and smellier than the next. Sequels can be made. And I could help.

more.

A really great story. Looking forward to seeing where Hannah takes things from here. Maybe some of Hannah's friends could get involved in her humiliation and some blackmail to keep her reluctant victim firmly under her control. Ignore all the flamers and keep adding chapters. More please!

I’d like to announce after several years of hiatus that I’m proudly returning to the world of erotica and continue fan favourite story: Hannah’s Revenge. I’ve already submitted Chapter 5 here, which has more details on my return, and will be visible after Literotica approves it.

While all new chapters of Hannah’s Revenge will be posted on Literotica, and always free of charge; for early access to new chapters of Hannah’s Revenge, along with access to Patreon exclusive new stories and commissioned artworks, consider subscribing to my Patreon.

https://www.patreon.com/thebritishmaster

Chapters 5 and 6 are already available there for Patrons to view.

But overall, I just wanted to say how much I’ve appreciated your continued support, even during my absence, and hope to pay you all back with some quality erotica now that I’m back.

In attempt to alter the pricing structure to make my Patreon more accessible to fans who wanted to enjoy exclusive early-access to new chapters of my works before anywhere else, alongside Patreon exclusive stories and artworks, I was forced to delete the account and make a new one. Unfortunately, that means the link to follow the old one no longer works and the new one the gave me is slightly less catchy.

Sorry for any inconvenience, but I wanted to alter the pricing structure to allow more people easier access to my work, which Patreon didn’t want me doing.

I’m having to make a new comment because Literotica doesn’t let you edit them, but if you check my bio you’ll see that this new link is for my official Patreon and is the best place to go for exclusive stories and artworks, to say nothing of the early releases, like chapter 6 of Hannah’s Revenge which is already there.

https://www.patreon.com/user?u=34967467

For someone claiming to be a 'British Master' from 'Edinburgh' this story comes across as somewhat 'American' - 'Cheerleading squad,' weights in 'pounds' not 'stones'.

Not sure whether considering the subject of the first chapter, it's more 'fetish' than 'Non-consent' but each to their own I guess.

Nice one

I Like It, 5-Stars,,, Yes!

Hallo T.B.M!

Your character Hannah, is such a sweet girl, I just love her... but if you or anyone else considers this to be the ultimate in revenge, I'll just say you didn't grow-up in Poysdorf Austria, at a girls group-home as I did.

Gay Kat.