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Click hereOnce again it was not what I envisioned, but this time I had no complaints.
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Anonymous7 months agoFirst half of this chapter read like a repeat. Also while Jill decided to break herself and descend into personality suicide by becoming a whore based on her story, the rationale for Swiss Miss.to do it is beyond surreal. She is a religious girl, who wants to see give her virginity to her future husband, does everything else (except anal) with her proto fiancé, then under pressure caves to having sex with him to make her commitment, not knowing he wss banging a harlot for many months while "waiting", her experience is poor but she still wants him and he abandons her, leaving her crushingly depressed not just because he betrayed her but also because she lost her virginity and her future soul mate won't be able to claim it? Huh? Ok fine she has a weird guilt complex. But with her religious background and her ability tonreisst temptation for a long time, what is her epiphany, what is her solution: becoming a prostitute who claims proclivity and experience with anal sex when she had neither, knowing that it will be really painful, because hey she deserves to be punished. Wtf? She has psychological problems and needs therapy. Yes at this point it will eb a romance for her and the MC, but seriously? Religious people don't self flagellate in modern times because they gave their virginity to a loser who abandoned her. And they certainly don't become painal hookers. That is beyond absurd. Jill (and Gary) came off as contrived but fictional (it is a story) but having second damaged one with such an idiotic rationale was just crazy. Only a woman with deep psychological problems would do that based on her virginity crisis. By that logic any woman who was religious and lost her virginity via rape would then choose to suffer rough sex as a prostitute. Huh?
JonnyReg7 months agoWas liking the story til this chapter. Did you really just tell the entire story over again?
Praetus7 months agoI feel he needs to have a third one to counsel, for this to transition from heartfelt to genuinely amusing. Then it could have that underlying comedy element of a skit, with him just leaning into the absurdity. And also it becoming a weird Christmas carol analogy. He's had the ghost of the past, now one in the present... is Brenda his "yet to come" if he doesn't split away from the angst?!
Anonymous12 months agoSo now he's the relationship therapist for first time prostitutes? All he has to do is tell his story and bam! fixes them. Okay, I admit to being intrigued as to how this ends.
