All Comments on 'Happy Valentines'

by coldnorrh

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

horrible POV choice. Automatically alienates roughly half of your readers. There's a reason there are no published novels written like this.

maninconnmaninconnabout 1 year ago
Cold and cruel.

‘Nuff said.

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Older gentlemen enjoy writing erotic stories, posted 3 but still need to improve