All Comments on 'Happy X-mas'

This was really my first attempt at both masturbation and the quickie/short story. Thanks for the reads and the votes. I welcome comments as I am new to writing and want to keep improving them for your enjoyment!

Considering the huge assortment of options on this site, I am guessing it would be hard to get high ratings for this - but I enjoyed it, it's probably close to reality for a lot of people (the quickie when everyone else has gone to sleep). It is hard to get the same volume of pleasure from a short story compared to your other multiple chapter ones, but good effort I reckon