All Comments on 'Hard Lesson'

Huge potential, but get into Ms Patrick's head.

What's she doing? How's she reacting?

More detail, more description, slow it down & you'll have a very hot story.

Loved it hopefully there will be more to cummmm!!!!

GREAT little story.... I agree that it would be nice to be privy to Ms Patrick's thoughts and inside protests and secret capitulations and blackmailed submissions...LOL

I hope you write again, soon....same style...short and poignant..... revenge becomes you!! LOL

Keep up the fine work!!

GREAT STORY! I still those drafts you gave me. Let me know if you want them back, or editing help, or anything.