All Comments on 'Hard Lesson'

GREAT STORY! I still those drafts you gave me. Let me know if you want them back, or editing help, or anything.

GREAT little story.... I agree that it would be nice to be privy to Ms Patrick's thoughts and inside protests and secret capitulations and blackmailed submissions...LOL

I hope you write again, soon....same style...short and poignant..... revenge becomes you!! LOL

Keep up the fine work!!

Loved it hopefully there will be more to cummmm!!!!

Huge potential, but get into Ms Patrick's head.

What's she doing? How's she reacting?

More detail, more description, slow it down & you'll have a very hot story.