by bluecortina
Excellent Story, this is the start to something great!!!
Great story!
Brilliant! Can't wait for chapter 2 !
Awesome story, it is clearly quite close to reality and resonates with my experience. Very hot and well written. Can't wait for the second chapter!
ZEROZEROZERO.... stopped reading before I finished page 2. Chapter 2 absolutely not...
Completely ridiculous. And badly written to boot!