All Comments on 'Hard Work Takes the Prize Pt. 02'

by SierraSprite

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent story

Your have created a great story about the successful results from the oddly matched 3 happy hard working contestants. Along with human interest, entertainment and humour.

Very well done.

I would really like to see you continue this story, it could potentially go in so many directions.

l0adi3l0adi3over 9 years ago
An excelent start

Well done. Now where do we go from here? There are so many possibilities.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great tale

great tale but it`s only in your dream that you could take care of four hot

women. lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Please continue

Of course it's unrealistic that he can handle 4 women, but these stories are supposed to be fantasies, not ultrarealistic. What happens when his father comes back?

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