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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A cruel ending(

Overall hot predicament though; hope there will be more fantasy+magic+bondage mix

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I don't see how it was Xariat and Yrlissa's fault. Dea should have been punished too.

TriskellaTriskellaover 5 years ago

Didn't like the worm eating, loved the rest!

Harlock45Harlock45over 3 years ago

Tell me similar stories, please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wish we could have gotten a sequel where we see how Xariat and Yrlissa are being treated.

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It is with great sadness I can confirm I have once again started a tight, short story only to have it spiral out of control into a sprawling odyssey.