All Comments on 'Haunted Mind'

Enjoyable story!

5

Great twist and a very well written story.

It appeals to the optimistic side of me, but to inject a bit of unasked for and, I'm sure unwelcome commentary, it's generally a bad idea to get into a quick, intensely sexual relationship with someone suffering from serious mental issues.

I loved this story and am a bit amazed that there are no other comments.

Both endings were great

Your talent and imagination is amazing and this story was exactly what I needed to help my writing. It displayed your craft and gave me insight to write my next. I fell in love with the main character at the start and I followed her and Theo living their lives with them. Thank you!

Ending 1 for me. Fave and a Fave.

Incredibly intelligent, creative and so erotic. Chloe is simply the best

The first ending, I would like more given that option. Such an amazing and well written story. Just phenomenal. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

You never fail to amaze. Definitely my favorite author

Some typical Chloe, irreverent, troubled, kick-us young heroine falls for older guy. But this one is also different, like a door to a new level has been pushed open. Keep on the excellent work!

Hi, Chloe, here from the contest. Great tale that led me to believe Theo had multiple personality syndrome before the true story was revealed. Most of the year, I would be good with the alternate ending but since this is a Halloween tale, ending 1 seems perfect to me in a spooky-horror flick kind of way. I enjoyed the story of the two came together but was particularly glad to see how you wrote Olivia’s character as sympathetic and still caring toward Theo rather than as indifferent or even antagonistic toward him as is so often the case in Lit stories. I rated this a 4.7 and rounded up. Best wishes in the contest.

This is fantastic. Thank you for writing it.