All Comments on 'Have You Seen Him Looking?'

I hope this is a series because as a stand alone story this was incredibly dull. I fail to see the incest aspect. Hopefully another chapter will help?

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DragonRider55

Incredible story

no sex to speak off, did not like one bit

Well written and you're such a tease! but I like it and I hope you continue it.

Love the teasing daughters and the dad trying not to notice. Please continue the story.

I checked your stories list. Based on that, the lack of a chapter number indicates this is a one off. If so, it's not much.

I hope there’s more. This is off to a good start.

I hope this will be taken further since this can go in many different directions. Looking forward to following up with the twins.

With brother out of the house, and mom apparently working night shift, there's absolutely no reason the twins have to wear anything at all from now on to tell daddy goodnight. And since dad is watching "twins" porn, obviously fantasizing about his daughters and the girls love teasing him so much, there's no reason the fantasy and teasing can't move to the next level... dad fulfilling his fantasies and daughters helping him do so.

Jason has some wonderful comments near the end.