All Comments on 'Having A Step-Daughter'

The ending was very disappointing. Why couldn't the younger Becky and you have started an affair outside of her mother's place?

I like the story. Too short and ending not what I expected. I didn't like that you warned us first about writing from a man point of view, I kept looking for something to be wrong. Young Becky could've continued a little longer>you think.

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW What a great story most men would die for a chance like that

No very well written, but it gave me the feeling the story is a true one.

The part of the younger Becky I could see being arousing, but there just wasn't enough plot in the story to be very erotic. However, good first try. Best of luck next time.

-LadySensualFire

I found the story exciting and thought of my own step daughter 20 years old. We have seen each other, I seeing her in a glassed in shower and her walking in as I was getting ready to get dressed. She is about 5'3 104 36C. Very nice tits and nipples. We haven't done anything but I have thought of her at times while masterbating. Please continue to write..Poo

Your story reminds me of Anias Nin's Delta of Venus. It is beautiful for it is not only sex but the strangeness and the beauty of Becky's act that makes this story a true literary piece.

Thank you for such an interesting read.

i have a step-dad, so that kinda freeked me out a bit, but in a good way. lol x

the ending was quite disaapointing, you could have had them staying together lke her moving out with him or wateva...

it well good! C:

It would have been great if it was longer and could have ended better, but most WOMEN say the same thing about their MEN. ;-)

Your writing is sooo erotic, such a turn on, you handled that delicate subject so deftly. So much (all of?) your writing is from experience, I hope one of your stories has a happy ending.

Disappointing, not a good story at all. 0 stars.