All Comments on 'He Begs Me to Choke Him Pt. 01'

by Fae_Changeling

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mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsover 3 years ago
Great start!

Hope to see more!

Submisky35Submisky35over 3 years ago

Good beginning. Well written. Probably a strange premise (the Adam's apple thing) to most readers, so it'll be interesting to see where it goes. I'll be watching for the follow-ups.

subdudeme13subdudeme13over 1 year ago

I would be begging. Great great read.

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