All Comments on 'He Came, He Saw Ch. 01'

It has a good start hope you post second part soon and equally good

i fucking love how it started give me more

I was very impressed with how you kept things on a relatively low level for starters, even going to the point of giving us background on how loverboy and miss moretti slowly found their way to where they were now.

Please keep writing.

This is a great 'foundation' story for your series. There's a LOT of possibilities. AND the Handjob scene was one of the best I've read. Congratulations!

It is rare to read a story here with as much attention to character and narrative. An excellent start to what I hope will be many more excellent chapters.

Wow. This was amazing. Youhave a really good writing style, give plenty of back story, and have just the right amount of detail. I love this story!