All Comments on 'He Couldn't Say No Ch. 02'

Only I painted her fence every year for nearly half a decade. I painted other things too, but with a different fluid. I think I'll go get a little single malt and a cigar, and sit on the deck over looking the mountains and remember those days so long ago.

Good premise.

Nicely told.

Could have used more in the way of instruction from her about how to seduce a woman.

Some extended kissing and making out. Tongue sucking.

Hints as to how to know when a woman was ready to move on to the next step.

Maybe a little titty fucking.

You DO need an editor/proofreader.

You wrote: "As she drove away she waived at me..." You meant WAVED, not WAIVED.

You wrote: "Suck on with my tits." What's the "with"?

You wrote: "See that little nob peeking out just at the top of my lips." You certainly didn't mean NOB. You could have meant NUB, or maybe KNOB. Probanly NUB.

Five stars.