All Comments on 'He Discovers She’s a Gym Rat'

I do love the confidence of athletic women.

Good premise.

When sex happens it's seriously rushed.

No foreplay. No preliminaries. She just sits on his cock and impales herself. Meh.

A proofreader/editor would help.

You wrote: "Her large breasts pulled the form-fitting material taught." TAUT, not TAUGHT

You wrote: "...so Sven could admire the smallish red nipples that peaked on Kelly's amazing breasts." PEEKED, not PEAKED.

Three stars.

Anon: while you are correct that the author should have used "taut" rather than "taught" in this context (it happens again in the next chapter), the author used "peaked" correctly.

NeoGatekeeper: Nice job! Looking forward to more ...