All Comments on 'He Forced Me I Forced Him to Love'

Great start, very believable, the people and their feelings are real and it was erotic. Hope there is a part two when that sees that cute ass tapped ;)

Pretty good story concept, but hard to read. You really need to follow normal writing protocols of using quotation marks to denote spoken words. If you’re not sure, asking an editor for help will make your stories flow much better and raise interest in your writings.

I liked it would like more

Hey- as a fellow trans women I really loved this story and found it highly relatable in parts. Also you’re a really good writer and this story flows extremely vividly.. I don’t know why that other comment was mean about grammar… anyways I loved it, I hope you keep writing