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bottovarnis almost 3 years ago

Great story! Nice continuance from the first one. Good graphic descriptions. I could see the event unfolding in my head. You made a fantasy come to life! The narrative and pacing were excellent. I was hoping the entire subway car would get into it at some point.

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Writer and editor of more than a hundred articles, short stories, and books. I love writing, and I write for me. I love to create fictional stories, putting people into circumstances I wish were mine. And I love to edit stories for other writers.

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