All Comments on 'He Takes Care of Me Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great job again!

I just discovered you and your stories are very hot! I spent a lot of the evening going through your library. Keep up the great work. When is your next one coming? I cannot wait! Anything new? Any hints?

Daphne123Daphne123almost 5 years agoAuthor
Aww thanks.

For the anonymous comment, you are so sweet. :) Thank you. I hope you enjoy all my stories. I'd love to know what your favorites are. I'm always working on something and try to get a chapter out at least one a month if not sooner. I put a lot of work into them but its worth it if I can turn people on and make them happy. I'm currently finishing the "Natalie" series and then will get to new stories. If you have a particular suggestion for something you would like to see let me know! - xoxo Daphne

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Perfect little short story

I just discovered your stories and i can firmly say i am in love! I appreciate the passionate and the build up to getting impregnated, as well as how descriptive you were with the big moment! I would love to see more descriptions of the teasing, such as fondling the teacher in the airplane heading to the beach vacation, teasing him knowing he cant touch her yet, etc. However, as is its a to the point, concise story that aroused me beyond belief! Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Great story, as always! I have to say I love your stories, one of the best on this website.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sweet and sensual

Can't rate for some reason, but I wanted to tell you that you did an excellent job. The writing is fantastic, and the story was extremely passionate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Where are the rating stars???

A delightful description of a loving conception. Wish mine could have been just like that! Happy to award a 5!

Daphne123Daphne123over 4 years agoAuthor
Star Ratings

Hey everyone, I'm loving the sweet feedback from everybody. It makes me happy to turn people on so much. :) As far as the ratings go, I usually turn them off after a month or so for each story just so I'm not checking on them all the time. I know that ratings are subjective but it's really important to me that I have only quality work on this site. I hope that the ones you can still rate turn you on too. As always, I love to hear from people who enjoy my writing. xoxo - Daphne

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
David blunt

It would be really be really erotic going bareback in a girl who is ovulating and dump some very thick cum in her womb

Clarissa72Clarissa72over 1 year ago

5 ⭐️…. Really well written. Only critique is “Gabs” saying “oh lawd” so much. Otherwise fantastic story and plot was good as well. Thank you for sharing your work. I’ll check out your other stories, because this one was so good. New Follower Here 💕

Daphne123Daphne123over 1 year agoAuthor

@Clarissa72 - Thank you! I envisioned Gabrielle with an accent from the American south which is why the "oh gawd" phrase pops up several times. I wanted to make her a rural character to make her seem a little more innocent. Most of my other stories don't use the phrase. I hope you enjoy other stories of mine. I didn't plan to write so many but people kept saying how much they loved them so I just kept going. :) - xoxo Daphne

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