All Comments on 'Head in the iClouds Ch. 02'

Great story keep going

These chapters are way too short.

Hold off on posting 3 till you have a few pages. Its impossible to get into something so short.

Many moms enjoy teasing son by giving "accidental" glimpses of her body. It is a fun and exciting activity. Knowing son will jerk off is very gratifying uplifting.

Loved the exposure and looking forward to more.

But please write shorter paragraphs - the eye skips down on an illuminated screen. Make your paragraphs 4/5 lines and you will get a higher rating.

So real it feels as if I'm there