by mummys dirty angel
First visit to Lit in a while and good to see that your stories are still getting me as horny as they did before! :)
The parts with Scarlet were very, very hot. And I've loved this story overall. But I have to say that if any Mistress *ever* tried to make me choose between my daughter and her, I wouldn't *want* her to "keep me". That's ridiculous and I don't think many mothers would find this realistic in the least.
The last chapter in this series was both erotic and it humanized Mistress Marie.
Many times the domme in the story is almost portrayed as a character with little love for her slave apart from what the slave can do for the domme.
The end showed a deep emotional conection between domme and sub that is lacking in some stories.
Very well done.
I loved this series and you found an amazing way to end it. Kudos
I am writing this many years after MDA has stopped posting because Ch 07 is still annoying. After 6 pleasant, well written chapters, we suddenly have the invention of a plot and a back story where a simple "The End" would have sufficed. This happens far too often. If any current writer reads this, please avoid the temptation.