by Daisy_x
Of course you should continue! Great start and a unique twist to discovery. Looking forward to more from these two..
What exactly is it that you want to know, whether we think you should continue or if we thought this was a good story. Well, for me the easy answer to each of those questions is definitely YES and YES. This was much more than just good though, it was sweet, emotional, intense and extremely realistic. This story was well written and had two believable and very likable characters.
Love this it's the awakening of feelings and emotions that are unknown
Yes you need to write more of these two lovers/friends
I think many of us want to be compelled to be taken by someone like Luke - there's the internal battle not to want to give in to the intense need that can all but consume us - but when we do, there's a liberation and sense of freedom. I think that's what Danny realized in that amazing kiss. More, please!
So cute!!! Chapter 2 please?? These guys are so sweet and their lovemaking is going to be hot, I already know
Definitely want more of this relationship. You write well. The sexual descriptions are hot, and your characters are interesting and compelling.