by dragontatto
A much better chapter, needs a bit of editing, but a far more readable and compelling tale.
Well done,
J
I am really enjoying reading you, Dragon Lady. The feminism in the story is a delight. Sorry, can't write anymore, I have a date with Ch 03 :) Lynn
well this is great i'mlove this story soo much and i hope she and charlies do get together
Wowwwee! Wonderful new plots, places and people--your characters are so "excitingly alive". Please hurry with
Chpt. 3 'cause we can feel the tension too!
Can't wait to read the next installment. Please don't keep us waiting too long.
Yay! The wait is over! I love this story it is so great I cant wait for the next chapter! Hopefully we get to see it soon! Keep it up! Thanks again!
I have waited for this..it's great so far i can hardly wait for the rest of the story..
The wait is over....well at least till I finish reading this chapter. A great chapter. Keep up the good work.
You are the best!