by dragontatto
Really enjoyed the ending. But now you simply have to write more. I'm a fan of your writing style and techniques. I'm really drawn into the story line not just the ... how should I put it.... imagery.
I have been avidly devouring your "Healer's Touch" Series after just as voraciously consuming "Just Between Friends" and I am so pleased with the "conclusion" to Kat and Charlie's story. Please continue because I would very much love to learn what happens between Johnathan and Zarita as well as the Royal Triplets and Kat and Charlie's Twins.
I admit to being a little disappointed when you did not go into more detail about the cure for Pati or include the whole ordeal in the conclusion. But I am also glad you didn't because it may have built up my hopes for more sooner rather than leaving me as I am now, patiently waiting...
write about Phillip and Zarita as well. And I'm sure there will be others though I can't see them yet, Johnathon and Pati's story has pretty much been covered I think and Dean and Ari's isn't big enough I think anyway. Still this was brilliant..I loved it.
The ending may have been cute but please only take a little rest then PLEASE (on bended knee) write another story with them with loads of chapters. PLEASE!!!
I have been anxiously waiting for your next installment, and check every few days to see if its updated, PLEASE I beg as all the rest.... write us more.. you keep us hanging for the next chapter but its well worth the wait... Keep up the great work!!!!!!
Love it! Im sad to see this story end but i love it! Ahh! This story was a great one! I hope theres more stories to come! Thanks!
This was such a great read! Thank you so much for writing and posting it. I love Charlie and Kat! I can't wait until you begin another story.
I loved the whole story although I hate to see it end.
I hope you will continue with this series and maybe even update us on Kat and Charlie from time to time. You are definitely a very talented and imaginative writer, I look forward to future works.
I have nothing else to say since everyone pretty much covered it already lol. Amazing, fantastic, beautiful ... what else is there?
A wonderful story from a wonderful storyteller!
There aren't even words for how great I thought this entire series and the one before it was! I love them so much! I really hope that you continue with these characters and maybe even expound on Phillip and his new chosen! I Love Kat and Charlie and Rand and Gracie and Jonathan and Patty!! I can't imagine not reading anything else about them again! Thank you so much for such lovely stories!!
Nicely done, as always! I'm definitely hoping you'll write about Phillip and Zarita, as I'm really curious about their history and how they got to where they were before their recent reunion. You're one of the authors I keep coming back to check whether you've added a new chapter to your stories, to see what happens next!
THIS IS A TRULY TERREFIC STORY. The ending is great, the characters are fantastic and the over all story keeps you wanting more from start to finish.
OMG, I think this might just be the best series that i have ever read. I really need to write more. I can't wait to find out what happens between Phillip and his choosen. And PLEASE write a series about the children of these couples!!!
Can't wait to read more!!!
i love this story so much. you just have to write more about sara and phillip. PLEASE!!!!!!
im sorry i did not leave a vote for each installment but i enjoyed each and every one i'd still like to inflict some pain to a few certain persons but such is life thanks to you
the ending is so cute! love that you made it a surprise!
I have never left a comment on this site before, but your wonderful story inspired me. It was absolutely amazing. I read all 25 chapters in one sitting. I wish there was more!!! Beautifully done.
i couldn't wait to get to the next chapter, so I only rated the Pprevious chapters. I'm so glad to have stumbled across your stories. Your my fav on here. I read Gracie's and Rand's story yesterday after having found Grace and Andrew. ALL IN ONE SITTING. And I just finished this one today!!! You have such a talent, absolutely loved the Venusian world you've created, and I do hope you keep writing about this world! Loved all the characters....and can't shake the feeling that the children will have wonderful stories too...looking forward to Kat and Charlie's babies, especially the secret TWIN daughter!!! Please do continue!!!
I started reading and couldn't stop. This was a great story. It kept me up until 5:00am and then I was up again by 8 to finish. I really thought the way you wove the characters together was great and there are enough unanswered questions to continue if you like. Such as...What happened between Phillip and Zarita in the year following their meeting after the ceremony? What was the fulfillment of Clara's prophetic words to Phillip? What will Kat and Charlie's babies be like if they are connected so closely already in the womb? Does Phillip get the throne back? How does the story of Jason and the ITS play out?
I think you have plenty to work with if you choose. Thank you for sharing with us all.
Pleas pleas pleas carry on wit more storys about thes characters i just cant get enuf iv read both rand an charlies storys...pleas write more
AWESOME, Please say that there will be more added. I want to know what happen with Kat's brother and his chosen. As well as what happen ti ITS. MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the ending the little chilren talkin are cute are u going to write more on this story?
You think the triplets are a handful, all
I've got to say is that the "twins" aren't
even born yet and they're already up to
mischief...how fun is that ?
THANKS "dragontatto"
This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time.
I've been reading it from start to finish all day today as I'm not well and I had time to kill. Once I started it I had to finih it and I absolutely loved it. Well Done. HAPPY NEW YEAR 2011
I have read this series many times, and really enjoy it. There are some continuity issues, for example the name of the Venusian power tester (changes from Eljah to Ulrich) and the issue of Kat's sexual experience (first it's mentioned that she had a single experience, then she states that she was given to ITS guards to rape, then later it's stated that her sole experience was a boy in college) but the story is still imaginative and well-written. I hope that eventually you will come back and finish the sequel about ITS.
I've read this story twice now and it's every bit as good as I remembered. Great work.
Plz plz plz make another story pretaining to this one or kinda like this one in new version thanks keep up the good work
los bebes ai bien funnys XD i love it ... no yo quiero ser una sorpresa.. me mato jaja
All in all a very nice story and very well written. I am so glad you gave it a good ending. Som many authors on Literotica leave their stories incomplete or give the endings that might has well not have been written. You are a pleasure to read in so many ways. Lynn
I really enjoyed your storyline, but I really would have loved to see more original ideas, like instead of coffee, maybe a brew made with some local "plant", or the jeans that Charlie was wearing and the vibrator, the baby carry all those e"arthly" items really threw me off the story..But, overall it was a wonderful journey, with more original ideas it would really have transported me to Venus.
A very nice read. Emotional at times but with strong links to Gaia reality as it is today. Thank you.