by FutaConquest
holy FUCK this was incredible. this was the first time i've gone this deep into subspace just from reading something aaaaaaaa i don't have the words i just want to be Blaire so bad
This is now among my absolute favorites. Holy God. Fuck. That was insane, in the best way. I can’t wait to see more. Jesus.
Fantastic build up, creation and delivery. The world building and tropes are top notch. Can't *wait* for the next installment~!
I love this so much, making sure to wait for a new chapter (please God let there be another one), this was some of the best writing I’ve read on here!
Awesome. One of the best I've read in Lit! Lets see Chapter 2. I want to see what Rea has for him.
I made an account so that I would be able to comment and tell you that you need to write more. This is so good, I was hoping it was a 30 part series. Great job!
my favorite piece I've read on this site so far. Excellent writing and world building, you should be proud!
Thank you for the kind words, everyone. Chapter 2 is on its way, but it may be a couple more weeks before it's done. My writing time is very limited, and future chapters will be longer, as they'll include adventure as well as sex.
This is by far the best story I've read on literotica. Absolutely loved it :D after watching too much of lara with the horse the "all-the-way-through" got me hard. If I could give you more stars, I def would. I would love to read more, awesome job :D
Oh my God! I can't tell you how many buttons this pushes for me. Please continue it, I love it.
Very well written and the smut is excellent. As others have said, the worldbuiding was a nice treat too. My only gripes are the party and that they are honestly vile characters, it just makes it difficult for me to be invested in a continuation.
The sex was hot to read and I'm interested in seeing where it goes, especially with Rhea. That being said, it really just made me want to read a 'nicer' version (pretty uncommon for futa on male, unfortunately). I feel bad for the kid.
The sex... this is so far beyond what I even would have imagined perfect to be. Well done.
I agree with anonymous, I think the characters are pretty unlikable and vile, the poor boy was (as usual) raped and abused. Also, if you're expanding, how do the healer class' powers work (besides just healing)? Can they attack, or create force fields? Can they summon angels like dnd clerics?
I sincerely hope to see more of this story, it's one of my favorites on the site.
I really hope to see more with Ellaria too, especially the slave collar aspect
Great. I actually really like the quality of the word play. That line about the centaur smelling like predators hunting prey was excellent. Hope you do a second chapter. I’m more into a masculine self insert being won over by a femdom/ fem boy type but this will get a read from me for sure
The story was wonderful, I am excited to see him spending time with the centaur...
Chapter 2 plz!
You absolutely need to do another Chapter, this was amazing and one of my all time fave stories on here.
Best femboy story I came across on this or any other site yet even with only a single chapter.