All Comments on 'Heart Is Where the Home Is Ch. 01'

Excellent new precedent, famous actor returns to his roots, meets gorgeous local girl, they try to avoid malicious attention a fail. They proceed to step it up a notch...

I know this is Literotica, I just didn't expect the sex so soon and so wanton.

I just hope this doesn't eventually turn into a LW category story. That would just ruin a wonderful storyline.

A movie star quitting and trying to live normal. I like it.

I like the warm and fuzzies from the new characters. I agree you should be able to stretch these 2 out for quite awhile and add a good bit of angst in to boot. Look forward to their future escapades.

Jack

More please.

You had to end it there?!? I was just getting into it!⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

5 star, get start looking forward to more chapters!

Excellent!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

More … love the idea of a movie star leaving the fake and becoming real …. MORE!!!

Perfect story. We can close the store, stop the voting. You have a winner, folks!!!! 5/5

Warning: Don't screw this up!!!

You're right! It is a good old fashioned romance. Great beginning!

5

A most excellent start! Waiting, impatiently for more.

THANK YOU

WONDERFUL, the star finding a WIFE at home. They are both taken with each other and hopefully it works!

Much more please.

Kate isn't going to like this, is she?

Loved it, just one small thing though...... More! I want more!

LOVED IT, AS USUAL!

Yeah, thanks for the break from the unreal world. Good story. Looking forward to more.

Great start. Looking forward to the next chapters. I really enjoy your characters.

5 STARS. LOVED IT AND CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 2!

A really good read. Well done.

Like reading a script for a great romance movie. Really enjoyed this, looking forward to the next chapter.

I like Romances almost as much as BTB/LW stories!!! 5 STARS!!!

Best story I've read in a month. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Ticking all the right boxes so far although I suspect something will happen in the next release to raise the heart rate.

5 stars

Great start to I am sure will be a great Bh76 Love Story. Now on to Chapter 2 already published.

Cheers

SAGE

hope to read more soon.

Great story. More!

Thanks for reading! I submitted part 2 last Friday. It’s just waiting on the site to publish. Part 3 is also ready to go.

Very good story! So well written... this is gonna be a great series. Thanks

Absolutely love this story. Keep it coming!

I really selective in who I follow as an author and you're one of my favorites. I usually troll the LW category for personal reasons and that's where I initally discovered your writing. (I got a good laugh from your intro about LW...) I haven't read any of your work outside LW, so looking for something new, I saw you had published a new story in Romance that referred to this series, so I'm off to read the next chapter...5*

Reading for the second time, going a bit slower to get to know the story better. Loving it.

Both Lainey and Ken have BITCH SISTERS!!

ESP JEN IS AN IMMATURE ANNOYING CHARACTER!!

So much bullshit.

Makings of a good story.Hope the standard is kept up.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Great story! It’s my second time reading this and it’s just as good as the first time, with the obvious exception of the cigars, I tried one years back and it took days to get the disgusting taste out, a more foul flavour in your mouth it’s hard to imagine, an old description I once heard was “it tasted like dried camel shit and tram tickets” which about sums it up. Regards, Ppfzz.

Sorry…I don’t do gay stuff. Nothing wrong with their life style. It’s must not my cup of tee.