All Comments on 'Heart Is Where the Home Is Ch. 02'

Another great chapter!

5

Loved the character development especially Lainey but a tad concerned. There are hints that something or other may well rear it's ugly head, perhaps multiple ones. Keen to read the next chapter.

5 stars.

Liked it, a lot. Make sure Kate gets hers.

Just remember:

People like happy endings :D

You are maintaining this incredible story just fine. It's hard to pull off stories like these, because it has been done to exhaustion, except in your case, you've found the perfect balance by making your characters so real. In fact, I find myself SMILING the whole time I read this. Please keep it going. Don't be tempted to go all noir, because it is perfectly fine to write a happy story. Thanks for the wonderful, entertaining read! Fifty Stars if I could!!!

Great chapter for what is looking like a great series in the making. I agree with Ravey19 you have left a lot of fuses that that could be lit at will to explosions of only you know the magnitude! Trust you to take care of our "Home" friends.

Good health, fun life and keep writing and entertaining your fans.

Cheers

SAGE

more to come????!!!!

And it was awful. The ladies were great but their virtually no privacy lifestyle sucked. They weren't even "A" list celebs and the fans and paparazzi were almost non-stop. Some paparazzi even followed me home a few times. I had to go out and explain to them I was just a boring nobody that didn't matter. After they figured out I was telling the truth they left LOL.

Love the story line. Keep it up and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Nice story to follow.

I’m awaiting the next chapter.

Thank you, Bh76 and keep it

up.

I loved the 69 Mustang sequence. StangStar06 would be proud!

Another very enjoyable story, keep they coming, Glad that there's another author who can write a decent romance.

I need some holiday uplifting - hope this doesn't go to shit! LOL 5*

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