All Comments on 'Heart Strings Ch. 01'

and yet totally true to Grandmistress Lisa Jones' literary persona. Really fine. Again we have a Mistress of the Craft totally on-game.

Or maybe I should say panties within panties? There are multiple victims in this story and Sandra is one of them, as well as Julie. I have to say, when I was a young man, this genre used to excite me, but now, as a middle aged man, the thought of someone co-opting anothers' will repulses me. Still your stories are always excellent, so I'll follow this one to where it leads.

While this is not my type of story, i just had to read what MissLisa had writen (perhaps she has some form of control over me ..... scary thought). So what did i find? A story not totally to my liking, but so well told with wonderfully defined characters and some form of mystery as to who really is in control, i have no choice but to continue to MissLisa says i can stop reading!

I really enjoyed your story and need to check out the other chapters now. Your note at the beginning about writing from the hypnotized point of view is my favorite way to write (and read) a good story

simply amazing....

A very good read; the best I've ever read on this site to be honest. The slow loss of Julie's control was executed wonderfully, as well as the ending. The only problem I had with it was Sandra's sudden remorse. It felt a bit shoe-horned in considering how she treated Julie. I think it would've made more sense if you hinted at it earlier, before that scene.

Wonderful beginning look anxiously towards the next installment.

5🌟's. Deeply enjoyed the way you described the inner turmoil that Julie. Dealt with till she learned to recognize the internal signs. Good work.

Ms. Jones, you have a _seriously_ disturbing imagination, and write well indeed.