All Comments on 'Heather Ch. 01'

Nice story. One comment: Was Ashley, being a Catholic girl, on birth control. Or is she expecting to get pregnant,

Excellent!

Very erotic story. The masturbation scene was well written. I can’t wait for chapter two.

Awesome again Ashley. Yes very erotic and sensual .love the way you two interacted in the masturbation part and the part about Ted going down on you was awesome ! reminds me of my moto TGIF tongue goes in first. I'll be looking forward for part two

Hot as Hell, can't wait for your next chapter. Hurry please. Five stars

Very well written Ashley! Takes me back to when my mom dropped me off at college (we both cried also) and the fact that my parents were both very religious. I can feel the tension of your parents having to say goodbye and the release of raw emotions in yourself.

The visual of how the girls interacted in their first masturbation session is an interesting description. For the majority of males reading this, this visual or fantasy is so polluted by the porn industry that an honest, simple interaction like you wrote about is so refreshing! Very well done!

Can’t wait for the next installment!

Horatio

Love the different characters and way its all described

Nice story. Seemed to flirt between past and present tense a lot,

Thank you for turning me toward this story, Will have to check out the other adventures of college days.

Super sexy!! Great writing. Cheers 🥂

That’s an extraordinary part one. Your have a knack for the descriptive.

So well written and easy to read. I really got into the flow with it 🙂

Ashley was a little daring to have sex with a male she just met. No mention of condoms or the possibility he might have an STD. Still, it's pretty hot for a young, religious, Catholic freshman to be having casual sex in a guy's apartment.

Well written with plenty of details.