All Comments on 'Heather's Bus Journey Ch. 04'

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tazsis1tazsis14 months ago

Oh my god... these stories are soooo hot. Well written and brief. Brilliant.

merrySMmerrySMover 2 years ago

Please continue this series. Excellent story. Poor girl is abused, then her "good Samaritan" pretends to help her but ends up taking advantage of her instead. Love this premise.

rodryder44rodryder44over 3 years ago

I'd gladly give Heather a place to stay.

lovekinglovekingover 5 years ago
Well wtitten

I enjoyed reading this series and look forward to the next installment. Love the udder shaped tits.

Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story

I really like this whole series. Maybe in the next one she gets a room in a frat house.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please continue this series of stories.

I read all the chapters so far. Good job. Next chapter add more details about Heather's udder shaped tits! I like how she doesn't want to "do a sin" but caves in and eagerly learns to suck.

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Hi. I like to read stories a lot. It's fun! Now I'm going to try to write stories too. I know it's not easy to do but I'll try my best.

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