All Comments on 'Heaven and Hole'

Em and I have both dabbled in the Fantasy genre before, but this is the first time we've consciously worked together to connect our worlds so directly, while also keeping them independent stories, unique to our own individual styles.

It's been a blast. And also a lot harder than we both anticipated.

Sincerely hope everyone enjoys it.

As always, Em, it's an absolute pleasure to work with you.

Oh, and for those interested, I'm hoping to have The Seduction Of Darkness published within the next few days.

@Djmac1031 - it’s been super fun. Good to see the first fruits in “print”. 😊 Em

Em, I just love the way your mind works

It's like Charlies Angels, if one was a real angel. And, er, one was a demon. And they solved cases with body swapped sex and lesbian orgies. What's not to like?

@lc69hunter - that’s assuming it does work, of course 🤪. Em

@djrip - 🤣. I’m expecting a call from Netflix. Em

Still a great read and looking forward to additional installments

@Mastered_again - thank you and thank you so much for your help 😊. Em

It was an excellent story...

I enjoyed it, and it held my attention till the end.

Not all stories do that.

Thanks for the good work.

Cagivagurl

@Cagivagurl - thank you, and thank you for your help 😮‍💨. Em

Another solid, well written work Em! Colourful cast of characters, and a plot with a few twists and turns. Lots of moving parts and story angles that you handled masterfully - it was a fun, engaging read, I loved the story and characters.

N.

@Sincity09 - I have never juggled so many characters and so many events. I’m just a humble stroke story writer, but clearly one with ideas above my station 😊. Em

It’s good to push oneself a bit, wander out of the comfort zone, to keep from getting too complacent. You did a great job, if you hadn’t taken a chance you’d have missed an opportunity imo. I hope you keep at it.

I read that it was a collaboration, that is so cool. That’s an interesting approach, and the finished story was great.

Last thing I would add is I would recommend that people read “Off the Shoulder” first, it’s a great intro to the two main characters, and helps ease the reader into the setting and story line (and is just a great story in its own right).

N.

@Sincity09 - thank you so much 🙏🙏🙏. Em

Hey Em! Wow! This story was awesome! It should become a sci-fi movie. You gave a lot of detail and managed to develop the role of each character and made it interesting throughout. Well done!

@CelticTiger88 - thank you so much for the lovely feedback 😊. Em

Oh fucking hell, that was a great story.

CelticTiger is spot on, it's rich and cinematic and I suspect could transcend this site should you so wish! Ten out of five :)

@Anon - that’s so kind of you to say 😊. Em

Great story! So well written!

@genzsub - thank you so much for saying 😊 Em

Outstanding!!!! When I grow up, I want to be Emily Miller!! Or at least able to write as well!!!

@FreyaGersemi - thank you so much - I’m blushing 😊 Em