All Comments on 'Heaven Ch. 12'

Not going to lie, and I don't know how, I ship Malcolm and Jaime. I mean, I know they'll still obviously fuck other people but I still rather see them as much of a couple as you can be in this community.

My only real complaint is that it was too short! Welcome back!

Thank you so much.

I'm always thrilled to see a new chapter of this come out.

Will we have a 13th chapter?

This story has been amazing however it is far from complete . What about the actual BBQ, the batchelor party ,the batchalorette party , the wedding , and the honeymoon

I would love to see some bi stuff. especially with the 2 Brothers. For example in the beginning when they both got sucked by their mom, to have her rub their cocks together. Also whenever people fuck a girl that already has a load in her purse, describe how the cum is all over their cock. Stuff like that. Maybe let the brothers suck each other as well!!