by Many Feathers
How do you know it wasn't really Brenda first and maybe Darlene was really Theresa and Theresa wasn't really Sally-this needs to be developed more :D
bearlee
Go to www.Time.com In the look-up section type in Christians Wrong about Heaven, says Bishop.
It is a lucid, instructive document.
Softly
Rod Serling (Mitch Albom not so much) would be proud, imitation being the most sincere form of complement. It does however make for 'predictable' endings, which would allow a 'twist' at the end of have more affect. Good mechanics and pacing.