All Comments on 'Held'

by NRMathis

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BlowPopJBlowPopJalmost 2 years ago

Your darkest yes, but it was great. I really want to know what happened afterwards. What is Bonnie's reaction to everything?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow. Such an intense story. I wonder what Riley was really up to in his head.

dnsontndnsontnalmost 2 years ago

Very dark and very good!

Dpj49Dpj49almost 2 years ago

Let me say, I finally loved it at the end. And of course, the love that developed between Lawrence and Ari was/is beautiful indeed.

What amazes me the most is how someone can even dream up all this shit. It’s a real talent!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I think Riley lied about letting Lawrence leave. He just wanted to keep both Ari and Lawrence.

ilikeskin69ilikeskin69almost 2 years ago

Sick, and stupid did not read all of it .

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

fuck... i clicked on this not knowing what i was getting myself into. legitimately brought me to tears.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I love this one! Was there a sequel to this one? I would have liked to have found out what became of those two..

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