All Comments on 'Hello Neighbour Pt. 01'

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UncleFester623UncleFester6232 months ago

Delicious story. Excellent how early it was difficult to tell who was dominant, and it's still not terribly clear, although Damien seems to be ascending. Very hot. Keep going! 5/5

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

So much potential in these characters. Just imagine the tasks Damien could assign her from across the street...

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