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chytownchytownabout 5 years ago
Nice And Hot****

Up and Adam!! Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing

amoroneamoroneabout 5 years ago
Great story

But could do with more detail. Slow build up would be good, some voyeurism and I'd love to read about Barbara's mature body.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years ago
Funny response

What is meant by his response "Go on then"

Seems an odd thing to say.

OldHarryOldHarryabout 5 years agoAuthor
Go on then.

Is a British expression of acceptance to do something, when really you don't want to.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

"(B)ottom flaps came lose..."

I know you're pretending to be English. Did you spend holiday there learing new expressions? I don't thing "lose" is the work you want.

Your story has potential if you break out the toys.

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An old ex-soldier with my own teeth and a good pair of shoes (somewhere), very laid back, great sense of humour, have lots of experience, with wide ranging tastes, but prefer the feminine variety especially the type of girl that packs a little extra.