All Comments on 'Helping Her, Saving Me Ch. 03'

I really like the way you're treating this, the relationships between the characters - for lack of a better word, the sensitivity of your approach. :) I'm sure you plan to continue this charming and very sexy story, but - please continue! (Sorry, I just felt I had to say that.) :)

You need to continue this series. Very good.

Oh my goodness. You had better write another chapter quickly. You are by far the best writer here. My version of paradise would contain all of the lovely young women in all your stories. They just seem like such interesting company as well as being so erotically perfect.

I like how you create your characters so that we feel we know them. Good Work!

But this guy is going to need another dude in the house.

How can he handle mom, both daughters and I'm sure his niece by himself?

This is a great follow-on to part 2 but written with attention to character and dialogue that makes it feel like a natural progression even though our hero has found himself in quite an unusual and highly erotic situation. Looking forward to the next part.

Thanks for the update!

> "Did I just hear you make my sister come?" she murmured sleepily.

This was my favorite part, lol.

I see you're steering it toward zero women unfucked by Rob and that's fully your prerogative. I hope you're having as much fun writing this as we are reading it! Cheers

Wonderful writing without rushed sex scenes. A very realistic story, or so I would dream!!

Perhaps my favorite thing about this story is. strangley, the length of the chapters. They're not so short that it feels like you're rushing to the sex, but they're not so long to feel like you're wasting time. The lengths so far have been perfect

The characters are what make this series such a fun read. Its rare to be actually invested in what happens to them. This is one of the series that I actually check to see if a new chapter has come out. Keep it up!

to finish what he started tonight

and a long weekend with Penny

Great writing! Looking forward to reading the next chapter of the wonderful erotic adventure.

There are times when I really fucking hate a character an author creates and Rob is one of them, purely because he has to be the luckiest bastard on the planet Literotica. Another gripping chapter. Well written and crafted. 5 stars. More please.

last paragraph "Good Boy" LOL funny, sexy, lots of deep thoughts, potential problems? Fun reading, thanks

Incredibly fine writing. One line did cause me to smile. While most men are delighted to find their cock glistening with saliva, very few of us are as lucky as Rob, finding our baton decorated with salvia. English is difficult. It can be understood though, through tough, thorough thought.

Another fantastic chapter! Now, on to Chapter 4.

You really have kept this great story going, a wet dream of a story but really good, nicely put together with great characters and descriptions

nice

finding the story more and more fun as I read, very nice the way you made the youngest daughter feel it was a strange situation for her to also be involved, much more realistic than just jumping straight into bed with him. Really enjoy the affection and feeling of love in the story. I guess I'm just an old romantic.

I just have to add, you might as well rounded off with the niece as well. I think she's already hinted her interest , in not so many words. I mean it is a fantasy after all, I just hope it's done as nicely and tastefully as all the others have been.

Bravo