All Comments on 'Helping Her, Saving Me Ch. 04'

Huh he married Ellie and not Belinda? Hmmm okay. Well loved the story either way.

Pure wish fulfilment, but no less fun for that, and well written as always. I normally prefer a story that is a little more probable, but something at the fantasy end of the spectrum is a nice change of pace from time to time.

Awesome story...

Really enjoyed the whole ride. Thanks so much for sharing it!!

Fantastic story. Well written and found myself wanting more but loved the ending.

Well was hoping for more but a good place to end it...good story and I enjoyed it

Great story. Awesome ending. Decisions.... decisions... Look forward to reading more of your works.

Holy crap this series is awesome! You have an incredible imagination and fantastic style of writing. I love forward to reading more from you.

You make it sound so natural and loving - great story and great job. Reminded me a bit of Dickens, A Christmas Carol with Scrooges redemption and new zeal for life except you completed the entire circle. Thank you for the wonderful tale!

A wonderfully warm, loving story with beautiful character development and all round respect. I enjoyed it so much that I immediately went back to read the whole story again.

Thank you!

What else but 5 stars? Beautiful series, beautifully written. Christ I hate Rob with every fibre of my being for starting out as such an irredeemable twat and morphing (brilliantly btw) into a guy that has to decide which of his harem to fuck. Yep hate him lol.

Keep up the good work, you're seiously talented.

Such a great and we'll crafted story, thanks for sharing!

Lost me when you married Ellie and not Belinda otherwise a fun read

Amazingly well done to keep all those women happy, and from such a disadvantaged start, too! Quite a transformation! Great series, and an easy 5*!!

Really enjoyed the way the story progressed. The transition from being the scorned male to being the centre of 5 women's universe is superb.

The rationolising of the various arguments for "should I, shouldn't I?" were well worked and worded. Superb writing and magical composition.

Well worth 5 stars, such stamina!

Truly epic! Even well ended, which few authors manage well. Not the only series of yours I have enjoyed, but the best.

A truly great story. Though it was a surprise the marrying the daughter rather than the mother made sense. The mother a contemporary of his older sister was probably several years his senior and he was that much older than the daughter. A much more acceptable situation in their English culture. And of course, something that a loving mother would do when thinking of her grandchildren and their acceptance in that same culture, A ten star if possible, but we are limited to five.

Well that’s still a pretty good story which is not always true in multi part stories, I know it’s a bit of a read for the boys, but you have written it in a very good way, nice characters and good descriptions that aren’t too hard to see happening

GGGGGGRRRRREEEEEAAAATTTTT.....

What a wonderful life!

It is always a sign of a good writer when the story is more important than what my old Granny used to call "the squishy bits!"

Easiest 5 stars yet!

Congratulations

I must say, this was a very satisfying story. And yes, I did enjoy it for the actual story (aside from all of the sex involved).

I would suggest that it be renamed as something like "My Wonderful Life" or "It's a Wonderful Life." Or perhaps..."All in the Family?" (Yes, I know that's already been taken!)

Thank you!