All Comments on 'Helping Marcia'

I'm bothered by "cummed". It may very well be correct grammatically, but makes me stutter when I read it. It reads so much smoother with "cum". Or is it just me?

Nothing about this story was in any way, shape or form believable. From Mom being all excited to follow daughter to fuck the 68-year old lady to the "Oh, did I mention we're nudists" followed by cannabis oil in the cookies....nope, this was just not working for me. If these characters and their story had started somewhere in the world of reality, maybe the story would have worked. But, try as I might, I could not suspend my disbelief. Even a porn fantasy has to have some basis in reality.